Tag: Writing

Matariki story

Task Description:Today we did an activity but we wrote our own story,about matariki it was really fun and hard because we had to read our story to our partner my partner was my friend Carnita  and we proof read to each other.We had to check our mistakes.

Bike Recount

 

 

On a weekend I went bike riding and I went because it was a contest for money and I decided  to join it. It was so cool I could see that I was  bike riding over steep cliffs and on steep cliffs it was really cool looking.

As I started to race and heard the horn  I could hear  people encouraging me and that gave me to to believe in  myself and try my best. It was halfway through and I could taste my sweat dripping down my face.It felt like warm water but in a salty way ,I stopped and tightly  held  my brakes as fear  came in my brain. It was really steep cliffs  and I just tightly held  my plastic seat and took a big deep breath and I just started moving .

Zoom !I heard  my bike rumble across the trail., I could  smell the fresh air as I zoomed off.I could taste something too, I could taste my sunscreen. It tasted  like chemicals  and I hate  chemicals that disgusted me! When I  finished getting off the really big  steep cliffs I felt amazed that I could do it .

Finally it was close to an end and I was really tired but I was in second place and I was really excited to be second place but suddenly  first place stopped and it was my chance .Crash !bang! Zoom! As i speed to the finish line I felt   crazy that i did it, I screamed out loud and got the money and it was so fun .

 

The magical scientist

 Crash!bang! As the bottles fell and broke Rachel woke up with a bottle on the floor . She had felt dizzy  but had to get ready  for school but she couldn’t move so she had to stay home from school. Her mother said “it’s alright it’ll go away”. So then she went school instead and she came running in saying” I can be a scientist and be so smart I can even be  a science teacher if I was a scientist but  that will be my dream and I will have in my head” she dreamed of being a scientist and saw in her dream that she could be  a real scientist.Two weeks later  she had gone to school learning about science she had  made an explosion and made it go all around the school Rachel said I wish could be a scientist .When she came back to school she said to her mother “ mum  i made new friend they are twins their names are bella and liz they are in to science too mum’ she says but then she think what will i do. So Rachel  went down the road to the shop and went to grab some milk until she came across a poster that said free lab and free lessons for science  and she screams yay! I could sign and put my name on it” she says with excitement . when she gets  home she tells her mum all about it she says “ mum can i go it only for monday and thursday mum it for a month and for free” then she thinks  and says” alright you can go” Rachel screams  and say thank you thank you thank you  thank you  so much she says on school on monday i will go strait they and i will come home by myself at five o’clock  she says to mum . Mum says okay fine with me then Rachel had to go to bed and Rachel stayed up just thinking that but  she couldn’t go to  sleep. She was so excited .The next day she wakes up really early and  gets ready fast. She can’t wait for the science class she goes to school and says hi to Bella and liz she tells them that she is going when she goes suddenly she feels faint and just faints.2 years later she wakes up in a lab full with mould and rusty old rats and sees Bella and Liz they found her she was her older  self she was nine years old but now she’s eleven years old and she feels different she knows she is a scientist because she can feel the power . Eight years later she was nineteen and became a science teacher and lived happily ever after but crazy science people live crazliy ever